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over 1 year ago
Give some RESPECTFUL fashion/ photography/ post advice to the person that posted before you.Lookbook is designed for flattering people looks and pics, that's great, but sometimes it could be good to listen to other's advice and opinions just to improve. (If you apply it is up to you)This can be a good tool for newbies but it's necesary to be courageous enough to listen to critiques and to be sincere yet tactful. I'm ready..
over 8 years ago
THE LOOKING GLASS,
I like the vintage and lighting effects of a few of your looks, especially, "If I Can See You Again". You should try to get a full body shot for all of them, and I would avoid black and white photography if I were you (I understand that your latest look consisted of black and white clothing). I would also try to have shots taken from more flattering angles so that you look taller.
March 12, 2011
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I have not any negative criticism for you, I can say is that your images are clear and in detail, I like your photos!
March 13, 2011
yes oder not
What? There has to be something...but thank you :)
I think your looks are good, but I think you shold choose photos where more of the outfit is visible. your latest 2 looks are not completely visibe.
April 6, 2011
A TIN CAN, FAR ABOVE THE WORLD,
i really like your looks, but i think you need to work more on the lightingand the composition of the photos.for example, overhead lighting or flash usually flatten everything out whereas side lighting gives everything a much more three dimensional feel.
i love how you flaunt your 'no hair' look, i find that courageous in one!i think some of your pictures include too much, however you look gorgeous! i love the variety of your poses!
April 7, 2011
April 8, 2011
Your looks are great, i like the different angles you take the photos from.But I think it would be nice to see some more accessories or maybe some closer shots of some detailing :)
April 10, 2011
maybe you can add some small minimall effects, try a different lighting.also I noticed some pics dont show your face, you need to show your face xD
I like the way this picture is taken. The only critique is i personally wouldn't wear a hat AND sunglasses together, i dunno why, it just doesn't seem right, but other than that its good! :)
April 11, 2011
You're looks are pretty good, i would say you should shoot some photos outside, it would provide better lighting :)
In general, you have pretty good looks. I think you could improve on the lighting of your photos. Perhaps if you edited the brightness a bit, the photos would look really nice :)
I like your looks. They're simple, yet very cute and you're really pretty. :)But I see the same shoes in quite many of your looks (those black shoes on your latests looks and the trainers). Those shoes look great, but with some outfits, I'd like to see more girly or feminine shoes. :)
There are a few looks which have rather cluttered backgrounds which can detract from your looks; go against a plain wall instead perhaps. If you don't have a plain wall (I don't xD) maybe just go outside and have a background of green foliage, which is always nice. Also, try use natural light instead of flash etc.I particularly like lookbook.nu/look/1776346-Feeling-Floral but I wish you were standing up so I could see it a bit better!You have the most gorgeous long hair; I think it's really nice plaited. You could try out different kind of plaits too.
April 13, 2011
AROUND THE CORNER, UK,
I think that your looks are lovely. Can't critise the clothes or composition, it's lovely! The only thing is maybe include your head so that your hair can be included in part of the look.
I will do in the next look!
I would say that there is a problem of composition in some of your pictures, such as there are many colors to divert attention, and the frame of the photograph itself, as in the case of the detail of some articles ...that's what I think.Greetings
i think that you need to focus your camera a little bit better, so the photos will come out clearer, and if you can, don't over-edit the photos like making the contrast really strong, etc. it makes it hard to look at the actual outfit :)
The only advice I could give, is for you to venture to somewhere you've never been and shoot in a way you haven't tried before. The shots you have are good, but you need to breathe some new life into your images, and I think that could be best done simply by trying something new. I like that colour blocked jacket with the hood :)
It did say to critique the person above you didn't it?
Oh yeah that was early on in modeling for haha. I've since really been working on giving more than just the "fierce" thing a try. :) As for a critique on your most current, I would just suggest to you that it could have been more interesting if you looking like you had more of a purpose. Photos in general catch people more when they have a story. You look like you just don't care about what's going on. But the image is self is clear and framed decently.
I was also skipped, so I'd like my critique by the next new person please!
April 15, 2011
IIIIII.... don't really know what to say. Well, you got your style established in your looks which is a good thing and you've got pretty nice photographs. The way you dress up somehow already gives me an idea of your personality and that's good too. idk, you pretty much express yourself well i guess. Nice looks 10/10 woohoo!!
Your photo quality isn't always that great; maybe take them outside in natural daylight more often. I also personally dislike the red/blue edges or lines you use to separate each photo; I think white would look better. And maybe you could get your hands on some really glitzy shoes to go with the rest of your liquid clothes?
April 23, 2011
i think youre pictures are really good actually, very natural,i mean you could make them much more "artistic" but i dont think thats your style. I do think that in that last picture you didnt show that pink dress very well though , i actually remember thinking that when i saw it in "new" .
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